Hours After You

But you are always there … somewhere …

Trent Lewin


                You didn’t clean up before you got in the car and drove away. But I did. I stayed. You didn’t call when you got to the bar, and didn’t save me a seat, even though I asked if you could. I called, and you didn’t pick up. I sat in the kitchen and ate peas and potatoes, and then I had a beer and wondered where you were.

                You managed not to say goodbye, but I did. When the police came to my house to say that you’d started a fight, I said sure, that’s you. That’s always you. They said you’d run from the bar down the end of the road – streetlights shining on the fog – and found your way into the forest. You hated that forest, you always said, but I know you didn’t. I know you loved it, and that’s why you went…

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True Crime Stories but …

12 Shocking True Crime Murder Cases True Crime Anthology Vol. 3 by Jack Rosewood presents itself just as the title indicates. Because I had earlier read and reviewed a previous Rosewood publication, Patrick Kearney Serial Killer, I was interested in comparing this work with his earlier work. I received both books through the Library Thing Member Giveaway Program in return for an honest review. In my earlier honest review, I was unimpressed to the point of negativity with Patrick Kearney. I thought the content lacked depth and the organization of the work was difficult for the reader to follow events. In this book, however, I found the organization much better and the content, while still shallow, was improved to the point that I would recommend it to my students studying English as a Foreign and Second Language. My students are in university. I would not recommend this at high school level for two reasons.

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Actually, Very Damaged

The Damage Done by Mark Matthews is a short read, only 36 pages. (ADMIN NOTE: I write this for my students who look at my blog to find “short” things to read.) A reader looking at the cover of this e-book might conclude that the story will be horrible, maybe terrifying. They would be right. First, think cannibalism. Could there be anything more terrible than that? Sure. Now, think cannibalism where the consumed one is either a family member or a loved one. Even more horrible, right. But there is more, a more horrifying scenario. In a book this short the scenario is everything. To write about it would be a spoiler. I’ve brought you through the first two stages; you should read further to see what could possibly be worse than what I have already described.

Short writing like this can be a stand-alone story or a teaser for works to come. This short story is one of those. After you get through the first main story of the title, there are an additional few pages of another story which lead you to a link where you can purchase ….

OK, you get the idea. This short presentation is an interesting and useful introduction to a genre.

It is not Really about Undressing

Undress Me in the Temple of Heaven by Susan Jane Gilman is a book for travelers, especially first-time travelers. As far as preparations and planning for travel, Susan and Claire made just about every mistake possible. The fact that they survived was just plain “dumb” luck. They were traveling in the mid-80s to China, a country that was characterized by suspicion when it came to contact with foreigners.

Claire had money, at least her family did. We get to know her as sort of a spoiled rich girl. This story is related by Susan, who had to work hard for a long time to save money for the big adventure the two planned. She was helped financially by a grandmother, but mostly she had to work for things Claire might take for granted.

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This is not “The Godfather.”

I received this novel because I nominated it through the Kindle Scout program and the book was selected (won). The preview I read prior to nominating the book was quite interesting.

Poisoned Rose by Nathalie Saade is a morally depressing book. An interesting story? Yes. Some interesting and unusual twists? Yes. Predictable? Well, yeah. We know early on that there are traitors inside a closed network of people where loyalty is everything. In a group of traitors, there has to be a supreme traitor. We get that. We know that low-level traitors or rogues will be revealed, tortured, and, if we can let them live long enough, the captive will provide clues as to the identity of the conspiracy leader. There is a romantic interest. We are pretty sure how that will work out.

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TLT: Disappointment


three line tales, week 30 – pocket watchphoto by Rachel Crowe

He took her out for a special birthday meal.

As he got down on one knee Martin didn’t see her breath catch.

She ran away in tears when he presented the antique watch he had brought her.

Written for: three line tales

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Writer Deadlines With a Twist

A Year of Stories – Collection 2: Black Coral by Steve Spalding is a project with the intriguing premise that a story will be written each day of the year. Specifically, each weekday, but there are sections entitled weekend writing. I reviewed the work Spalding published for January and paid attention to two things. Firstly, did he write every day? Yes, and has been mentioned, sometimes on the weekend. Secondly, were the stories interesting or was it just a vocabulary dump? For January, yes stories were interesting, some more so than others, but I was overall impressed.

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