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NOTE (NOT REALLY A WARNING)

I try to be positive with reviews. I have less than ten reviews out of six hundred that I consider negative. For me, a negative review is either one or two Amazon stars. Rather than give one or two-star reviews, I prefer to abandon the book early. Occasionally I find a novel with an interesting idea written by an author who appears to have the qualifications and knowledge to be a writer but the offered publication is sloppy and annoying. The novel then finds its way into that small group of approximately ten. This is the case with Into the Vault. For the most part, I will let the work speak for itself.