Disappointing and Unbelievable Ending

Ben Jackson by Amanda Linehan is only 39 pages long. But that is longer than short stories a reader will find in Writing on the Walls 1, also by Amanda Linehan which I reviewed on April 13, 2018. I found the short stories in the first work contained interesting stories of relationships. Nothing crashed or twisted, there were just interesting observations. This short story began with some nice character observations, described an interesting mystery to be solved and then, like the cliff off which Ben Jackson went, the story went completely off the rails into total unbelievability.