Colorful Extreme Descriptive Vocabulary

In order to cut to the chase early: WARNING, Extremely explicit and gory.
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Don’t waste your time, although that did not stop me from writing the following rant.

Shawcross Letters has an important subtitle: My Journey Into The Mind Of Evil by John Paul Fay (and Brian Whitney). Brian Whitney is the author of this publication. John Paul Fay is a narrator and commentator. Fay is a commentator when revealing the content of letters written by Arthur Shawcross, an actual serial killer who died in 2008. Fay acts as a narrator when he describes his own struggles with life. Incarcerated Shawcross has been described as evil personified. A serial killer with a fondness for cooking and eating various victim body parts, Shawcross never meets Fay except through letters. If evil personified means the person is a unique representation of evil, Fay would disagree. Fay describes Shawcross as almost a soulmate. It seems as if Fay is saying that he would be Shawcross if only he (Fay) were braver. For now, Fay claims to be able to sublimate the same evil acts described by Shawcross in letters into Fay’s own writings with this book.

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When Is A Dilemna A Dilemma? (Never)

I found little evidence of a dilemma in this short story with what I consider to be a deceptive title. For me, a dilemma is a situation in which I must make a decision that will damage me the least whether that is in terms of material or more abstract goals. With General Rahmini’s Dilemna by Benson Grayson, there were multiple short terms dilemmas. But the General always fortuitously avoided them. He did not escape disaster by clever, well-planned actions; rather unusual opportunities presented themselves. After the first few times this happened, the novel became boring and I read along just to find out what other fantastic pieces of luck would fall out of the sky to improve his life. A reader of this might think a long time about Karma.

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A Good Story Idea But Needs Editing

ADMINISTRATIVE NOTE:

Blindsight by Nj Paige (yep, the two letter first part of the name is sometimes listed as two capitals, sometimes as noted here) is a prologue to the Maxi Brown series. The first book of the series is available as a pre-order with a delivery date of 30 Sep 2017. This prequel is available on Amazon for USD 0.99 or free through KU but I got it free through Instafreebie. Based on my read of this prequel I will not read Book One of the series. In general, I encourage the use of KU to read prequels. KU offers longer selections than Amazon free samples; I am more able to avoid accidental purchases. A download through KU is also a verified purchase which I believe supports authors.

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Wait (a Long Time) for the Surprise

The Ghost of Molly Holt by Amy Cross is a 2017 publication by this very prolific writer of horror fiction. I read a lot of her novels and have never been bored by her writing until this novel. It was probably bound to happen. But I can not resist comparing this novel to her other novels I have read. This one just doesn’t match up as far as quality of plot and characters. So, what happened?

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How NOT to Publish a Novel

CIA Assassin and Other Stories by Benson Grayson is an incredibly poorly prepared book to appear in a Kindle edition. It is sold on Amazon at USD 0.99 and is only the second novel I will return to Amazon for a refund in the five years I have been with Amazon. I will wait for a few days after this post to return the novel in case I hear from the author about this poor review. My Kindle copy is full of highlights about the poor presentation and I want to be able to point out specifics if the author wants to challenge anything of my claims.

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A Best Seller–Not

Diary of an Angry Old Man by Rick Minerd has a title that demanded my attention. I can sometimes be an angry old man but mostly I’m not. There might be survival tips here. There might be shared experiences or new perspectives on growth and new experiences as a senior citizen. I began reading the book with high expectations. The first few pages were a bit puzzling as far as organization. Minerd started the story with this title: Chapter Six? This was followed by Chapter Seven?, Chapter Eight?, and Chapter One. Minerd explained why he began the book at Chapter Six. He didn’t explain the question marks.

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Stung, but not by the Price

Stung by Alec John Johnson is a 35-page short horror story. Either Amazon or the author helpfully pointed out that the story is about 10 000 words so for readers who pay attention to their reading speed like a runner pays attention to pace and stride this story is a helpful measuring device. Unfortunately, that is the best feature of this short story. The writing is good and keeps the reader going to the next page, and then the next. There is a suspenseful build up and then it is as if the writer were interrupted, went away to do something else, and never returned. There are three parts, called chapters, with a character name that identifies each chapter.

Emilio works on the docks. Each morning he must empty trucks of their containers so arriving carriers could take the pallets of goods to their final destination. He wasn’t sure where the low buzzing sound came from; he wasn’t even sure if it was real. It might just be another gift of last night’s alcohol binge. But the buzzing got louder and something landed on his arm. The small insect was amazingly colorful. As Emilio looked at it, he saw indications of an imminent sting. When he swept the insect off his arm before being stung, the air around him seemed to erupt with buzzing which became louder and louder. Emilio decided to make a break for his car and get out of the area. Did he make it? The answer would be a spoiler and this is a no spoiler review.

Chapter Oil introduces James Roth, an unwilling helper for an extremely attractive neighbor whose husband was gone a lot and whose kids were in school. There were hints of possible playtime if he would just do one small favor. It seems he was asked favors on a weekly basis and there had yet to be a reward. This time he would change the oil in the neighbor’s car. But it was a difficult job with a car that had all its component parts placed very close together. When James severely scraped one of his fingers and pulled back in pain, he dislodged the oil pan cover and was drenched in hot oil. He scrubbed so vigorously to remove the oil that he didn’t see the amazingly colorful insect that landed on his arm. While under the car he had heard a low buzzing. Now he met its creator. Will James survive the meeting? See the last sentence of the paragraph above.

Chapter Amanda & Tony find the mother and son in a small apartment with outside temperatures so hot that Amanda had to leave a patio door and kitchen window open to catch the occasional breeze. Because she was listening to her favorite radio show, she didn’t hear the buzzing. But she heard the screams. The screaming seemed to be far away at first; it also seemed to be heading her way as the screams became more numerous and intense. At the same time, the radio broadcast an emergency message, something about foreign insects arriving in the US. Everyone was told to stay at home or place of employment. That was fine with Amanda; she had already closed the patio door and kitchen window. The noise of the screaming decreased. The buzzing decreased except for the one that was in her house. She could only hide in Tony’s room for so long. She knows she must grab her child, get to her car, and flee to a safer area. Does she succeed? See the end of paragraphs two and three.

I can safely say that I would never write a spoiler for the end of this short story. I can’t find it. The writing carries the reader along and then flees. I feel like suing for writer abandonment. I do not recommend this short story to anyone except to those who want to see some fairly good writing that goes nowhere. Maybe the author will feel the urge to continue this nice beginning in the future.